http://myzodj.wordpress.com I am a Question Mark. Mon, 29 Jan 2007 16:51:12 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://myzodj.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-4 misterryan Mon, 06 Nov 2006 05:53:36 +0000 http://myzodj.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-4 Number 7 should be your best sentence. It's the most creative and witty of the bunch. The challenge is it's jumbled. I wonder if there's a way you can revise it to make it flow more smoothly. Number 7 should be your best sentence. It’s the most creative and witty of the bunch. The challenge is it’s jumbled. I wonder if there’s a way you can revise it to make it flow more smoothly.

]]> http://myzodj.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-2 Vivian Fri, 27 Oct 2006 02:13:21 +0000 http://myzodj.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-2 Slowly, Liliane walks towards the railings, climbs over and stares down at the street, 20 stories below her. She trembles, but she is really tired of having such a life. Scenes of her parents quarreling, her brother fighting, her coming 'O'level examiniation timetable and her recent health report begin to appear in her mind. Her tears roll down her cheek and drip down the 20 stories drop by drop like pearls. Liliane always believes that she has got the most miserable life, but no one knows about it. Though she appears to be an extrovert in school, always waving to someone she knows every other minute, deep in her heart, it is filled with sadness. She has been trying all sort of ways to end her pathetic life, but they always failed. This time, Liliane is determined to succeed. She looks at her health report and gets depressed even more, when she sees the word "depression". She then leans forward, and lets her body fly down the building, with the pieces from health report. When the police arrives to see Liliane lying in a pond of blood. Hundred metres away from her, it is a health report of someone by the name of "Liliana". Slowly, Liliane walks towards the railings, climbs over and stares down at the street, 20 stories below her. She trembles, but she is really tired of having such a life. Scenes of her parents quarreling, her brother fighting, her coming ‘O’level examiniation timetable and her recent health report begin to appear in her mind. Her tears roll down her cheek and drip down the 20 stories drop by drop like pearls. Liliane always believes that she has got the most miserable life, but no one knows about it. Though she appears to be an extrovert in school, always waving to someone she knows every other minute, deep in her heart, it is filled with sadness. She has been trying all sort of ways to end her pathetic life, but they always failed. This time, Liliane is determined to succeed. She looks at her health report and gets depressed even more, when she sees the word “depression”. She then leans forward, and lets her body fly down the building, with the pieces from health report. When the police arrives to see Liliane lying in a pond of blood. Hundred metres away from her, it is a health report of someone by the name of “Liliana”.

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